Elias zips his jacket higher, the plastic clicking against his teeth. He doesn't look at the sky. Looking up only reminds him of the celestial tear that’s getting wider every hour. He keeps his eyes on the cracked pavement, searching for the only thing that matters now: a reason to walk another mile when the world has stopped running. 3. The Mythological/Prophetic Draft World-building for fantasy or historical fiction.
: Ensure your narrative eventually hits the benchmarks of Clarity, Cogency, Conventionality, Completeness, and Concision . End of Days
Which of these resonates most with what you have in mind? I can expand on any of these or shift the genre entirely. Elias zips his jacket higher, the plastic clicking