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He zoomed in. It was a man in a maintenance uniform, holding a tablet. On the tablet’s screen, Leo saw his own face, sitting in this very room, reflected back through the system.

"Perfect," Mara whispered in his ear. "Now, give them a glimmer of hope. Trigger the emergency lights in five... four..."

Should I focus more on the of this future or the characters' emotions ?

He stepped out of the editing suite and onto the balcony. Below him, the city was dark, but it wasn't empty. People were stepping out of their apartments, looking up at the stars, their eyes no longer glowing with the digital overlay of The Glitch .

He zoomed in. It was a man in a maintenance uniform, holding a tablet. On the tablet’s screen, Leo saw his own face, sitting in this very room, reflected back through the system.

"Perfect," Mara whispered in his ear. "Now, give them a glimmer of hope. Trigger the emergency lights in five... four..."

Should I focus more on the of this future or the characters' emotions ?

He stepped out of the editing suite and onto the balcony. Below him, the city was dark, but it wasn't empty. People were stepping out of their apartments, looking up at the stars, their eyes no longer glowing with the digital overlay of The Glitch .