Silverchair - Emotion Sickness đź”–
Should the be more hopeful or remain dark and atmospheric?
He felt like a series of disconnected wires. His brain was firing signals that his body refused to catch. For weeks, the world had been a smear of “orchestral tear cash flow”—a beautiful, tragic performance that he was tired of starring in. People checked in, their voices sounding like they were coming from the bottom of a well. Are you eating? Are you sleeping? Silverchair - Emotion Sickness
“Addicted to the self-loathing,” he whispered to the peeling wallpaper. Should the be more hopeful or remain dark and atmospheric
He grabbed a jacket, stepped out into the hallway, and let the heavy door click shut behind him. The "emotion sickness" was still there, a dull ache in his chest, but as he took his first step toward the stairs, he decided—just for today—he was done with the rehearsal. If you'd like to refine this further, let me know: For weeks, the world had been a smear
Should I expand on a or keep it as a shorter "vignette"?
