Should the tone stay , or should it turn into an action-adventure ?
Elias finally looked up. His eyes weren't filled with fear, but with a strange, frantic clarity. "We aren't drifting, Sarah. We're being pulled." Key Elements of the Scene Strona33
The door to the galley swung open, slamming against the bulkhead. Sarah stumbled in, drenched and shivering. "The rudder's jammed. We're drifting toward the shelf." Should the tone stay , or should it
: A small vessel named Strona33 trapped in a relentless storm. Should the tone stay